The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The figure shows the multiple

stage

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of converting

sugar

cane to

sugar

.

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the process has seven stages which

starts

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with growing

sugar

canes and

ends

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end

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with drying and cooling. In the first

step

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the planted

sugar

canes grow up for 12 to 18 month.

Second

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step

is the harvesting time which can be done by hand working or

machines

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and vehicles. In the next stage, Crushing,

sugar

canes

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cane

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converted

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is converted

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to

lequid

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liquid

juice with a machine and

then

the

syrup

will be

purifying

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by passing the liquid

throghout

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throughout

the limestone filter in the fourth

step

. In

continue

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continuation

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, in

term

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terms

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of Evaporating, the mixture is heated , so the water will be evaporated and

juice

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the juice

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becomes

syrup

and

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then

the

syrup

goes through the centrifuge which separates

sugar

crystals from the

syrup

by its

spining

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spinning

movement. Eventually, in the

last

step

by drying and cooling the substances,

sugar

will come out.