The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relev

The graph illustrates the entire process of manufacturing carbonated drinks, including purifying, desensitizing, adding

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, packaging, and transportation.

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, there are five stages before the final product is sent to supermarkets,

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with raw material, which will be heated and blended in substance to create

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and texture before being packed into different containers and shipped to destinations. First of all, raw

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will be sent from the storage to the

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softener through a filter, where the chemicals are involved to complete the process of

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cleaning. Following the second stage for heating evaporation and carbonation

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includes pumping the helf-completed products into electric heaters, later the cooling pipe will reduce the temperature of the

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before relocating it into carbon dioxide to make carbonated

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. In the third stage, carbonated

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will be combined with various elements to create

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, including colouring, syrup, and

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. Final products will be packed into either can or bottle

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after

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through a filter

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and be sent to supermarkets.