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People are having more and more sugar- based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

#people #sugar- #drinks #drink
In the era of technological advancement and globalization, it is not a challenge for anyone to gain
the
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recognition
of
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 product consumption. Regarding the issue, a group of individuals have commonplace in consuming sugary
drinks
 in their daily life. In
this
 essay, the reasons and solutions
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this
 problem will be taken into in-depth analysis.
To begin
, there are a number of origins to be raised in relation to
this
 fact. The first cause for
this
 is that
sugar based
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drinks
 provide
people
 with enough energy for a whole day, which
bring
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a
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great value for the youth nowadays. Because of the development of society, the demand for work
have
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 significant growth.
Therefore
,
people
 tend to face with many pressure in life and easy to
loose
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 their energy. using a bottle of
high
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sugar
 amount
drinks
 is because
of
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that to become more and more familiar.
In addition
 to the factor aforementioned, I
also
 believe that the variety of
flavor
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,
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and colors
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colors
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 play an important part in
this
drink
 consumption, which attracts
people
 to buy and enjoy. Sugary
drink
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drinks
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 are
also
 really cheap, so
people
 can buy
it
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them
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 easily without being confused. Taking the incident that
Coca cola
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have
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 many attractive advertisements of buy one get one, which
enhance
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 the interest of customers.
Conversely
, some viable solutions to the phenomenon can be suggested in order to diminish the adverse side of
this
. On the societal scale, it is fax enhancement
that is
 in charge of the purpose to increase the cost of
this
 product. When the price becomes more expensive, the number of
people
 buying products will decrease as they
have
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 not much money to pay for that
drink
. Another reasonable measure that would be introduced is that sugary
drinks
 can enhance the awareness of
people
, which can make those feel confused and realize the disadvantages of
the
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unhealthy
drink
.
According to
the
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Harvard
university’s
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 study of health care, 100
milliliters
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 of
sugar- based
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drink
contains
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 about 50%
sugar
 and other unknown chemicals. All of these things are the main reasons to cause several health care problems
such
 as high blood
sugar
,
diabete
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diabetes
 or even heart attack. As for the original ideas, there are many reasons to cause these problems, namely the demand for energy and the variety in appearances and prices of these unhealthy
drinks
.
Besides
 that, increasing the fax and
people
’s awareness is
some
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 feasible ideas to solve the problems of high
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sugar- based
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 consumption in
people
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