The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
The given graph illustrates the comparison between the number of people born in
China
and the USA
from 1920 to 2000.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that birth rates in both countries look almost the same in the initial years
but as the years
passed on, the rate increased rapidly and the communist nation touched the highest point when compared to the USA
. Later on , the number of newborns amount was reduced drastically in both countries. However
, the USA
birth estimate was high compared to China
.
In the initial era, the number of newborns in the USA
was just above 10% with respect to China
but after the year 1940 birth rates dropped steeply from 12% to 5%. However
, there was a sharp rise in born percentage up to 15% . After
this
, it never touched that rate and it went down slowly in the next 50 years
reaching nearly just above 5% although
it maintained a high throughout the years
rather than China
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