The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
The given graph illustrates the comparison between the number of people born in
China
and the
USA
from 1920 to 2000.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that birth rates in both countries look almost the same in the initial
years
but as the
years
passed on, the rate increased rapidly and the communist nation touched the highest point when compared to the
USA
. Later on , the number of newborns amount was reduced drastically in both countries.
However
, the
USA
birth estimate was high compared to
China
. In the initial era, the number of newborns in the
USA
was just above 10% with respect to
China
but after the year 1940 birth rates dropped steeply from 12% to 5%.
However
, there was a sharp rise in born percentage up to 15% .
After
this
, it never touched that rate and it went down slowly in the next 50
years
reaching nearly just above 5%
although
it maintained a high throughout the
years
rather than
China
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words china, usa, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • demographics
  • population control policy
  • One-Child Policy
  • Baby Boom
  • fertility rate
  • census data
  • fluctuations
  • societal norms
  • economic prosperity
  • Great Leap Forward
  • family planning
  • contraception
  • workforce participation
  • aging population
  • urbanization
  • trend analysis
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