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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less

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In
this
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 day and age, more and more
people
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 consume sugar-based
drinks
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 in their daily life
such
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 as soft
drinks
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 or energy
drinks
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. I am going to discuss a variety of reasons why we tend to drink
this
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 kind of product and figure out several ways to encourage us to limit our consumption of
such
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drinks
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. There are two main reasons why a large amount of sugar-based
drinks
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 are consumed every day.
Firstly
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, these
drinks
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 provide extra energy that pushes mental alertness and helps consumers to remain the stable concentration necessary for their work or study. The proliferation of technology leads us to an extreme tempo of life that requires
people
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 to spend
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 greater effort to succeed, unfortunately leading us to some unhealthy factors like energy
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.
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, the reasonable cost of
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 like Pepsi or Coca-Cola accidentally encourages consumers to use these kinds of
drink
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 more and more.
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 why we totally agree that the increased consumption of sugar-based
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 is linked to consumers’ lack of awareness and knowledge of a healthy diet and lifestyle
as well as
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 the dominance of fast food in the food industry.
Although
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 restricting citizens from
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 consume sugar-based
drinks
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 is a complex mission, there are a few ways that could be done to discourage
people
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 from using those
drinks
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 regularly. One of all suggestions is to impose crazy higher taxes on production which properly increases their price. I'm pretty sure that affects the number of
such
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drinks
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 being consumed. But
that is
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 not enough to solve
this
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 problem because the key is their awareness of using unhealthy
drinks
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 so educational propagation campaigns that encourage
people
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 to follow healthy dietary guidelines and lifestyles and to refrain from using sugar-based
drinks
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 are highly required.
To sum up
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, the point at issue when
people
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 have more and more sugar-based
drinks
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 is caused by a number of factors as mentioned in the essay. Increasing taxes on sugar-based
drinks
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 and running propagation campaigns to raise consumers’ awareness of their health are two reasonable solutions to deal with
such
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 problem
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