The charts below show that UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full time work after leaving college in 2008
The two bars portray the
students
of UK graduates
and post-graduates
who did not continue full-time work
after graduation in 2008.
Overall
, further
study was the highest number among graduates
and post-graduates
(29,665 and 2,725) and voluntary work
was the lowest (3,500 and 345).
Looking into detail, 17,735 graduates
student chose to be part-time workers, while
postgraduate students
only 2,535. On the other hand
, there was a numerous number of unemployment for graduate students
with 16,236 and 1,625 for postgraduate students
. However
, from the data, the number of students
who joined in voluntary work
was the lowest (graduates
: 3,500 and voluntary work
only 345).
All of this
shows how many Bachelors prefer to continue their studies than to work
.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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