Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternative to a natural environment. Is it necessary to keep animals in zoos?

The connotation of the surviving environment of

animals

never fails to sparkle

people

’s heated debate surrounding

zoos

. In the contemporary age, a number of

people

stubbornly cling to the view that wildlife should be captured by

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, but some hold the opposite viewpoint. In my

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convincing arguments and well-organized evidence would be displayed below for the sake of supporting the central idea that it is necessary to keep

animals

in

zoos

. In term of

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level, the reason mentioned below seems to be advisable and deserve more consideration,

zoos

have the protection purpose. Specifically, many wild species suffer from

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environmental deterioration which might be caused by human

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, climate changes and so on.

For instance

, pandas seem like perfectly epitomize these suffering species. On the one hand, greed makes illegal hunter

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prey pandas for their precious fur, which has happened frequently in decades as the related department did not realize the severity.

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urbanization

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forward rapidly,

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number of pandas’ habitats have been irreversibly destroyed by environmental pollution,

such

as toxic fumes,

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water.

Therefore

, it is undisputed that pandas should be preserved in

zoos

. Another factor that should be taken into consideration is that

zoos

help to establish the world views of next-generation by constructing the connection between

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and

animals

. For most

children

,

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must be one of the most popular entertainment

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because

children

are always curious about

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unknown creatures.

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curiosity would be fully satisfied when they get close to various

animals

, and

this

curiosity would unconsciously thrive

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exploring spirit. The world would be infinite in their eyes

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if the spirit takes root in their hearts.

In addition

, some researchers proposed that it is easier to inspire empathy in

children

when they get

along with

animals

, especially adorable

animals

such

as dogs,

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.

Zoos

act as a bridge which

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the gap between

children

and

animals

. In summary,

zoos

send our

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a significant gift which could affect their entire life.

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rarely reach an absolute consensus on

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controversial

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. The other side of the coin has voiced strong opposition, saying that

zoos

would kill

animals

’ survival skills. In fact, most

animals

in

zoos

indeed lose their ability to hunt under the

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of

people

.

Tigers

in

zoos

provide

a strong evidence

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to support

this

view. They don’t have to prey and struggle to feed themselves, because the breeders would do everything they can to make these

tigers

comfortable.

However

, in exchange, some

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tigers

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might be trained as acrobats on the stage to entertain the tourist sometimes. It really confuses

people

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whether they are

tigers

or just giant cats.

Although

zoos

suppress the nature of the

animals

to some extent, they provide more advantages than disadvantages. Taking into account all these factors, we wholeheartedly safely come to the conclusion that it is necessary to keep

animals

in

zoos

. Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to maintain more natural elements in

zoos

which make

animals

feel like they are in wild via taxpayers’ funding.