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Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternative to a natural environment. Is it necessary to keep animals in zoos?

#zoos #alternative #environment #animals
The connotation of the surviving environment of
animals
 never fails to sparkle
people
’s heated debate surrounding
zoos
. In the contemporary age, a number of
people
 stubbornly cling to the view that wildlife should be captured by
zoological
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park
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, but some hold the opposite viewpoint. In my
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 convincing arguments and well-organized evidence would be displayed below for the sake of supporting the central idea that it is necessary to keep
animals
 in
zoos
. In term of
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 level, the reason mentioned below seems to be advisable and deserve more consideration,
zoos
 have the protection purpose. Specifically, many wild species suffer from
the
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environmental deterioration which might be caused by human
behaviors
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, climate changes and so on.
For instance
, pandas seem like perfectly epitomize these suffering species. On the one hand, greed makes illegal hunter
to
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prey pandas for their precious fur, which has happened frequently in decades as the related department did not realize the severity.
On the other hand
, with
the
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urbanization
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 forward rapidly,
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 number of pandas’ habitats have been irreversibly destroyed by environmental pollution,
such
 as toxic fumes,
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 water.
Therefore
, it is undisputed that pandas should be preserved in
zoos
. Another factor that should be taken into consideration is that
zoos
 help to establish the world views of next-generation by constructing the connection between
human
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 and
animals
. For most
children
,
zoo
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 must be one of the most popular entertainment
facility
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 because
children
 are always curious about
the
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unknown creatures.
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 curiosity would be fully satisfied when they get close to various
animals
, and
this
 curiosity would unconsciously thrive
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 exploring spirit. The world would be infinite in their eyes
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 if the spirit takes root in their hearts.
In addition
, some researchers proposed that it is easier to inspire empathy in
children
 when they get
along with
animals
, especially adorable
animals
such
 as dogs,
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.
Zoos
 act as a bridge which
cross
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 the gap between
children
 and
animals
. In summary,
zoos
 send our
offsprings
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 a significant gift which could affect their entire life.
People
 rarely reach an absolute consensus on
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 controversial
issue
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. The other side of the coin has voiced strong opposition, saying that
zoos
 would kill
animals
’ survival skills. In fact, most
animals
 in
zoos
 indeed lose their ability to hunt under the
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 of
people
.
Tigers
 in
zoos
 provide
a strong evidence
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 to support
this
 view. They don’t have to prey and struggle to feed themselves, because the breeders would do everything they can to make these
tigers
 comfortable.
However
, in exchange, some
of
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tigers
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 might be trained as acrobats on the stage to entertain the tourist sometimes. It really confuses
people
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whether they are
tigers
 or just giant cats.
Although
zoos
 suppress the nature of the
animals
 to some extent, they provide more advantages than disadvantages. Taking into account all these factors, we wholeheartedly safely come to the conclusion that it is necessary to keep
animals
 in
zoos
. Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to maintain more natural elements in
zoos
 which make
animals
 feel like they are in wild via taxpayers’ funding.
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