The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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the maps illustrate the development that occurred on the ground floor of a library between 2001 and 2009.
overall
, the plan followed a significant transformation throughout the surveyed period.
while
the most remarkable changes included the addition of several kinds of books and the appearance of technological devices, the southern
section
of
this
library remained unchanged. looking at detail, at the centre of the library's ground floor, all square tables were replaced by rectangle tables,
whereas
the
section
for newspapers and periodicals was removed for the location of films and DVDs. computers were allocated under
this
section
.
furthermore
, the fiction
section
was demolished to make way for children's books and children's area. moving west, the ground floor recorded the addition of fiction, kitchen, economics and law books in lieu of just self-help and history categories. librarian's desk, entrance and stairs which were situated in the south stayed unchanged throughout the given period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words section with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-service machines
  • computer stations
  • digital resources
  • book sections
  • fiction, non-fiction, reference
  • café area
  • repositioned
  • user preferences
  • management strategies
  • children's area
  • youth engagement
  • educational activities
  • meeting rooms
  • collaborative spaces
  • community events
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