The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Bar chart illustrates, the average UK
salary
by city, including seven cities with average
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an average
of
salaries beginning from 24,750 to 34,000, Change preposition
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in addition
, the
currency pounds sterling.
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to the
Overall
, to begin
with, Cambridge, England
is the highest salary
Before London, While
the second ad third cities were Bristol and Edinburgh, therefore
, the numbers in brackets after the cities' name is the number of people
in the sample,
Firstly
, London was the biggest salary
, 33,634 pounds sterling by the number of people
is 50951, as we see the second city s Cambridge, England
; with 2180 people
in the sample, moreover
, the average salary
is 29,854. hence
, Edinburgh, Scotland and Bristol England
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furthermore
,the average salary
in Glasgow,scotland
is 26,150, Change the capitalization
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in contrast
, the proportion on
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of
salary
in Manchester, england
is 25,909. as I mentioned the lowest salaries were in Birmingham, Change the capitalization
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