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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant
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The given maps illustrate the changes and the renovations that were made on the entrance road to a
city
Use synonyms
 hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, public transportation stations and road maintenance were more moderate and accessible to both public and private vehicles near the
city
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 hospital in 2010 than in the previous years. Regarding the analysis in 2010, it can be seen that the bus stop was removed and replaced by the public car park on the east side of the
city
Use synonyms
 hospital .
In addition
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 , the roundabout was built near the parking area on the east side in 2010
also
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 ,
while
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 the park in
this
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 position was only kept for the employees of the hospital.
Whereas
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, a bus station was added on the west side of the
city
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 hospital which gave access to the two newest roundabouts that were installed in 2010 to extent widen the path of the
city
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 hospital.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure, development, expansion, accessibility, comparative analysis, layout, direction, emergency services, facilities, pedestrian paths, urban development, strategic planning
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