This line graph illustrates the number of tourists who visited Caribbean islands between 2010 and 2018, measured in millions

This line graph illustrates the number of tourists who visited Caribbean islands between 2010 and 2018, measured in millions
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This
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line graph illustrates the
number
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of
tourists
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who visited Caribbean
islands
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between 2010 and 2018, measured in millions, with two different lines representing
tourists
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staying on cruises and those staying on the
islands
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,
as well as
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a combined
number
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. In terms of the total
number
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of
tourists
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, there is a clear upward trend from 1
million
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in 2010 to 3.5
million
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in 2018, with significant growth observed in 2016.
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, for
tourists
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who stayed on
the
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cruise ships, there was a marginal fluctuation in the first two years, but a stable increase
up
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to 2
million
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in 2017.
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, the
number
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of
tourists
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staying on the
islands
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did not show a significant increase compared to the other two lines. It reached a peak of just over 1
million
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in 2011 and remained plateaued for the following 5 years, with even a slight decrease observed in 2016, accounting for 1.5
million
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people. In summary, the graph shows a consistent increase in the
number
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of
tourists
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visiting Caribbean
islands
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, with a relatively stable
number
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of
tourists
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staying on the
islands
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compared to those staying on cruise ships.
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