The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps show the Norbiton industrial area in present and a redevelopment in the future, which will be more residential and less industrial.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, the first map Linking Words
include
lots of Factories surrounding the roundabout and in the eastern line. Change the verb form
includes
Also
, there is Linking Words
Correct article usage
an a-road
a-road
in the southern way connected to the highway. Correct your spelling
a road
Likewise
, farmland is just right to the river.
In the future, they are Linking Words
planned
to construct more roads to connect the area to each other Wrong verb form
planning
esily
, Correct your spelling
easily
such
as Linking Words
Correct article usage
a a-street
a-street
in the east with houses, Correct your spelling
a street
play ground
and Correct your spelling
playground
Correct article usage
a school
school
Fix the agreement mistake
schools
at the end
. Linking Words
In addition
, Some housing Linking Words
are
planned to be built in the north and Change the verb form
is
north west
. More facilities will Correct your spelling
northwest
be construct
Change the verb form
be constructed
such
as shops and Linking Words
medical
centre. Correct article usage
a medical
Also
, they are concerting to build a line in the north to connect the farmland and some houses with the zone behind the river.Linking Words
As well as
another roundabout will Linking Words
built
to the southern way from the large one.Change the verb form
be built
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