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A group of people believes that guardians should teach children.How to be an ideal member of society, whilst other experienced people think that school is the best place to teach every newborn.This essay intends to elucidate both the perspectives before reaching and opinion.

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It is believed by
some
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that
parents
 are the
one
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 who
are
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 responsible to guide their kids.
However
, some deem that it's the prime duty of teachers.
Therefore
 I would
also
 say that
schools
 are the accurate place to learn
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attenuates
. To commence with the opinion that
parents
 are more likely to teach their
children
. It is believed that they are the only
one
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 who
are
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 really close to their
children
 and can help them to learn new things
according to
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their
the
 capabilities.
In contrast
,
due to
 hectic work
schedule
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 and
long run
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 lifestyles, guardians do not have enough
time
 to teach their
children
 because it is really hard to teach new ones. To add to it, as of the indulging nature of the
parents
, kids don't make themselves
to
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learn in
proper
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 manner because they don't fear
from
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their
parents
.
For example
, it has been detected by a recent study on child growth that 90.01 % of toddlers and preschoolers are becoming more aggressive and stubborn only because of the
pempring
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pampering
pumping
 of their
parents
.
Therefore
 in that case really typical to get extra
time
 and make
children
to
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learn something new.
On the other hand
, it is deemed that
parents
 ought to admit their
children
 to learning
schools
 which is the better solution to guide the kids. To explain, in learning
schools
 a child
get
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 a chance to become in contact with other students of his age, where he/ she can start learning by following his classmates and
this
 method becomes interesting too.
For example
, a teacher can put learners in small teams to work cooperatively and
also
 can assign small competitive work
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 in order to foster them to learn more. Needless to say, a tutor
have
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 enough
time
 to teach the
children
 as it is his job
whereas
parents
 find it hard to get vacant
time
 for their
children
. To illustrate, it can be said that a teacher can focus on teaching
children
 with plenty of
time
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 will definitely lead to a
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 among the
children
. In
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, I will say it's an easy method to make
children
to
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go to learning
schools
 so that they can learn things
while
 remaining
in
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disciplines
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 and become able to build strong social bonds by engaging with classmates.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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