One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. · What do you think the causes are? · What solutions can you suggest?
There is no doubt that
traffic
is becoming one of the pollutions for a lot of centres towns, which are usually coming from the increasing numbers of cars drivers. In this
essay , I will discuss the reasons for this
problem
and suggest some solutions that might help to reduce its horrible impact on people
and cities.
One of the main causes of this
phenomenon is the increasing need to use transport vehicles, which can be only handled by travelling from one place to another by car in most cases.In other words
, in this
world, most of the important places that individuals have to go to daily such
as workplaces, schools , universities and so on are far away from a lot of people
's homes which can be difficult to walk to. In addition
, this
problem
can be solved by offering a different public transport for citizens such
as bus stations, underground metro and so on ,which can be also
cheap to pay for so people
will use it more often. Moreover
, that also
could help college students who can not afford a car while
they are just normal students without enough financial support.
Another cause that could have a role in this
problem
is that the number of people
is almost impossible to manage especially in centre cities, normally because of the service that is
there like healthcare, education services and more. However
, that not a big problem
if the government manage to put policemen everywhere to reduce at least half of the impact on
Change preposition
apply
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
as well as
building new streets in the places where is the traffic
are
above normal. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Thus
, the congestion of the traffic
could be solved.
To conclude
, The traffic
in any big town is quite normal and easy to solve with the help of the government to make new streets and provide new ways to travel easily.Submitted by fftaif73 on
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