Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many

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with more wealth usually give

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to the

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with less development or very little wealth

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it still does not find the solution to their poverty

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developed

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should give another type of support to the poor

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of helping them by giving

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.

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essay completely agrees with that statement.

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is because it will make the poor

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dependent on wealthier

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the dependency will cause

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to have no jobs If the wealthy

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keep supporting the poor

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with

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then

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the poor

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will become dependent on the wealthier

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for

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which will eventually lead to very less development of the

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to causing very few job opportunities Dependency causing

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to have no jobs will still again lead to poverty.

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of the wealthier

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helping the poor

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with

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can help the poor

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by making job opportunities for the

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and educating the

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on the latest technology which will lead to the development of the

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and

eventually

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it will cause the

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to become independent Keeping in mind the above points we can come to the conclusion that a developed

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should support the poor

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with other types of help

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as giving job opportunities educating them with the latest technology and helping them become independent

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of supporting them by giving

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and making them dependent on the rich and developed

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will cause no good for both the rich and developed county and poor and undeveloped

country

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