Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many

countries

with more wealth usually give

money

to the

countries

with less development or very little wealth

however

it still does not find the solution to their poverty

thus

developed

countries

should give another type of support to the poor

countries

instead

of helping them by giving

money

.

This

essay completely agrees with that statement.

This

is because it will make the poor

country

dependent on wealthier

countries

additionally

the dependency will cause

people

to have no jobs If the wealthy

countries

keep supporting the poor

countries

with

money

then

the poor

countries

will become dependent on the wealthier

countries

for

money

which will eventually lead to very less development of the

country

in addition

to causing very few job opportunities Dependency causing

people

to have no jobs will still again lead to poverty.

Instead

of the wealthier

countries

helping the poor

countries

with

money

can help the poor

countries

by making job opportunities for the

people

and educating the

people

on the latest technology which will lead to the development of the

country

and

eventually

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,eventually

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it will cause the

country

to become independent Keeping in mind the above points we can come to the conclusion that a developed

country

should support the poor

country

with other types of help

such

as giving job opportunities educating them with the latest technology and helping them become independent

instead

of supporting them by giving

money

and making them dependent on the rich and developed

countries

will cause no good for both the rich and developed county and poor and undeveloped

country