According to most projections, the world’s population will continue to rise, until it plateaus at 9 to 11 billion in the latter part of the 21st century. Without a doubt, population growth represents the largest problem facing humanity at present. Do you agree that this is the greatest issue faced by us today?

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there is no water in most African and Asian countries not for drinking and not for other activities that cause the fall down of Agriculture. So the harmful
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