You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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There is no doubt that good health is the key to a happy life. Usually, an individual's
well being
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is linked with his nutrition intake, work-outs and a
peceful
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peaceful
mind. I belong to
India
, and in my country,
people
need to make
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concious
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conscious
effort
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to get to the desired state of health. In
this
essay, I will explain with examples some of the measures that citizens of my country need take to stay in shape.
India
is known for its rich food heritage.
However
, despite
this
perception, it has been found that our food is highly
defficient
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deficient
efficient
in some key elements required by our
body
,
such
as
protien
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protein
proteins
and
fibers
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fibres
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.
This
is because, the consumption of
protien
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protein
rich meat is very less in
India
, and the primary source
for
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this
element
are pulses
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, which are not
suffient
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sufficient
to meet the dietary requirements of the
people
.
Thus
, Indians need to consume
higher
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quanity
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quantity
quality
of
protien
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protein
rich items
such
as
Broccolli
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Broccoli
, paneer etc. to meet the
nutirtion
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nutrition
nutritional
demand of the
body
.
Further
,
people
should
also
switch from wheat flour to multi-grain flour in order to increase the content of fibre in the
body
.
For example
, eating multi-grain bread
instead
of white bread is a small change that can help keep the
body
healthy. Another key step towards healthy living is
investment
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in a good
excercising
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exercising
regime.
People
of all ages, including children and
elderly
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the elderly
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, should
excercise regulary
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exercise regularly
as per their age and capacity.
For instance
,
India
is
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has been blessed with the gift of Yoga, and one could develop a daily routine to practice Yoga for 30 mins. It is one form of
excercise
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exercise
which is appropriate for all
age-groups
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age groups
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.
Parcticing
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Practising
yoga not only helps with
body
movements and
strengthen
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strengthens
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our
muscels
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muscles
, but it
also
includes meditation which relieves us of
the
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apply
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daily stress. Once we develop the
habbit
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habit
of
excercisng
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exercising
, it becomes part of our life and keeps us away from issues
such
as obesity, joint pain etc. In conclusion, it is essential for every person to stay healthy. For
people
of Indian origin, the two most effective steps to achieve a sound mind and
body
is eating nutritious food including
protien
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protein
proteins
and
fibers
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fibres
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, and
excercising
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exercising
regularly.
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