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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

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people
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 tend to wear
western
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clothes
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instead
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 of traditional ones. I believe that there are several reasons that can explain why
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 case and
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 trend can be advantageous and disadvantageous in equal measure. On the one hand,
people
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 choose suits and jeans as proper
dresses
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 to wear for a variety of reasons. For one,
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 preference comes from
western
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clothes
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’ convenience, as these types of
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 might be suitable for everyone and do not take
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 effort to wear.
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, most traditional
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 tend to be heavy and difficult to wear. Another point is that most
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 consider Europeans as stylish and modern
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, which in turn leads them to think
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western
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clothes
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 as a sign of
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a modern
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 person.
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 of
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, with
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 for being modernized,
people
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 from different countries tend to prefer these
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 over their national ones. I believe it can bring about some benefits. First and foremost, by trying various outfits,
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 can develop their taste towards dressing.
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 is mainly because
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 habit allows
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 to know which outfit is most appropriate for them and what sorts of
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 they should wear for different events. In spite of its advantages,
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 trend can be detrimental in some respects.
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, if everyone
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 for
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, they tend to lose their own identity which remains from early generations. When it comes to traditional
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, they might tempt
people
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 who wear them, to never forget about their background and keep in mind their ancestors. In conclusion,
people
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 tend to wear unfamiliar
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 for various reasons, yet
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 trend can bring with its positive effects
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 negative ones equally.
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