Some people think that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or a health club, while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both view and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

It is sometimes seen that magazines and journals are the best way in reading new
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,
whereas
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of
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suppose that there are other types of media,
such
as TV, radio or Internet sites, which would be more effective in getting the
news
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why I tend to agree with the latter view. On the one hand, a couple of decades ago newspapers are considered
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main source of information, because not any person could afford a radio.
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, the majority of people in developing countries every day tried to purchase their national magazines in order to be aware of
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circumstances
of their country and to know the worldwide
news
.
For instance
, in 1913
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people were able to read the latest
news
only through the newspaper called ‘Kazakh’, written by the members of
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Orda’ organization.
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, implying the development of new technologies, it is a waste of time to read
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the newspapers,
whereas
instead
of
this
it is
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possible
to get the latest info through websites in a minute. It is undeniable fact that
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the
news
on that Internet portals renew every second and people can look through them
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, listening to music or even working (during
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lunch time
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).
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can save
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time and apart from that, it is well-known that papers of
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newspapers are
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a risk of putting through bad weather conditions.
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,
due to
rain papers might be torn.
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, it cannot be denied that
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newspapers
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getting
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, but these days it is easier and faster to read the
news
on websites.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cardiovascular health
  • resistance training
  • physical endurance
  • muscle tone
  • caloric expenditure
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • motivational factor
  • fitness regimen
  • holistic health
  • sustainable exercise habit
  • metabolic rate
  • physical exertion
  • exercise consistency
  • health maintenance
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