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Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Childcare centres provide the best services for
children
 of preschool age, and other
parents
 think that family members
such
 as
grandparents
 will be better carers for
kids
. In my opinion, both of these views are true, but it will depend on the situation. Some people think that childcare centres are good.
Firstly
, because their
kids
 may not have enough
grandparents
 to help their
parents
 for taking care of them, or the
parents
 are living really far from their
grandparents
such
 as in other countries for work, and the second thing is the
parents
 don't have enough time for teaching and playing with
children
.
Additionally
, the
parents
 might be violent with their
kids
 after working time in the company.
Therefore
, some people or
parents
 think that kindergarten or childcare centre is the best place for their
children
 for growing up.
On the other hand
, other
parents
 scare that their
children
 will be not safe and might be bullied when they give them to other places, so it will affect their
kids
 when they grow up in the future. That's why if they give their
kids
 to
grandparents
 for taking care of, they might be safe, and healthy.
In addition
, the
grandparents
 may be happy more when they play and stay with their grandchildren. In conclusion, both views always have a positive thing and a negative thing for
children
. The important solutions are that the
parents
 should consider carefully their situation, and which way will provide good things and happiness for their
kids
.
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