the pie charts below show the devices that people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in canada in two different years.
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carts
compare the percentages of different Correct your spelling
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kind
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the
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Overall
, it can be seen that the usage of conventional Linking Words
TV
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sighnificantly
dropped, Correct your spelling
significantly
while
tablet and flat-screen Linking Words
TV
increased during the 10 years period.
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with, in 2009 conventional Linking Words
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was
accounted for 34%, which made it the biggest sector. Desktop Unnecessary verb
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computer
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computers
laptop
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laptops
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used with 18% and 20% respectively. In terms of Replace the word
devices
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tablets
tablet
it was the least in amount with only 5%, Add a comma
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as well as
flat-screen Linking Words
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which was with only 3% more.
In 2019, surprisingly, conventional Use synonyms
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suffers Use synonyms
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an extereme
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decrease and it Correct your spelling
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was
accounted only for 4%, making it the smallest proportion. During the same Unnecessary verb
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period
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TV
went from just 8% to 27% and mobile Change to a plural noun
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phone
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phones
also
saw a big rise in 2019 Linking Words
represented
26% of total usage. Desktop Wrong verb form
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computer
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computers
laptop
changed slightly, but both of them dropped Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
with
6% and 8% respectively.Change preposition
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