The maps below show an idustrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an idustrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The first picture shows the layout of an industrial

area

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in the town of Norbiton, and the second shows

future

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the future

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development of the site. The two illustrations compare the layout and features of an industrial

area

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in the town of Norbiton now, and in the future.

It is clear that

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some main changes will be completely made in terms of the use of the

area

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. There will be developments with regard to shops and housing. At present, we can see that there are eight factories, all of which will be demolished.

However

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, It appears that the plan is to build seven housings for residents in various places. One will be built at the top of the

area

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, three will be located in the

center

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centre

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along the road below the river, and the remaining will be built in the southeastern part of the

area

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. It seems that the road will be expanded across the river to the north. There will be one smaller ring road near the medical

center

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centre

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. Some new buildings

such

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as shops, medical

center

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centers

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playground

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playgrounds

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, and

school

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schools

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will be

also

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constructed.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

183 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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