News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these picture are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

In my opinion,
pictures
are more meaningful than words.
Pictures
which are shown on TV and in
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the newspaper
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newspaper
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for
News
stories always give us definite meaning. In my opinion, I think the
pictures
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News
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the News
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are way more effective than words.
However
,
i
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also
believe that
pictures
helps
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to understand the movies.
To begin
with,
pictures
are
the
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drawing made to clarify the event or an incident visually. Even if
people
do not know what the incident or
news
is about, the photo will show the situation.
For example
, elderly
people
who cannot read, even though, they can
understands
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the
news
by simply looking at the
pictures
. It gives us knowledge.
Sencondly
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Secondly
,
people
who do not understand the movies or their language can
also
understand the movie by looking at the
pictures
. In
conclution
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conclusion
,
pictures
are much more useful than words
that
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people
with simple knowledge of the language can
also
know about the incident.
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