You have just read an article in a national newspaper claiming that town centres in your country all look very similar. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter, saywhich point in the article do you agree with? Explain ways your town centre differs from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the article’s writer.

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Dear

Mr.

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Shawn, I am writing

this

letter to express my point of view with

regards

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to the article that you have written in the ‘Paradise’ national newspaper on

23 rd

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February 2023 (page 34). You have clearly mentioned that

town

centres

across Mauritius look similar,

however

, I do not fully agree with

this

statement. I would not disagree with the fact that

town

centres

have more or less the same outlook,

however

, the buildings differ in size and layout. Some

centres

accommodate a large number of people compared to others. There are numerous facilities like children’s

playroom

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in some

town

centres

On the contrary

, these facilities are not present in some

centres

across Mauritius. I would like to offer you a guided tour of my

town

so that you can get a clearer picture of my perspective. I would be grateful if you could please spare some time so that we can discuss

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this

topic jointly. Yours Sincerely, K.Jad

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

162 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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