The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in particular country.

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is a curve graph which describes the trend of the

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of different

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groups

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of movie watchers in a particular country.

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the data, the

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from 1978 to 1988 witnessed a drop in the

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of movie watchers of different ages. of different

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groups

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of

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visitors, which went up gradually until 1998, when there was a levelling out for five

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. It can be noticed that in 1988, the

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of movie fans from every

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groups

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different

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groups

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of

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visitors reached the bottom.

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，

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, 1978 saw a peak during

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period.

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, the proportion of

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fans

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different

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groups

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of

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visitors remained

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stable from 1998 to 2003. After 2003, the proportion of people over 50

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old of

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is different from the

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of other ages, and there is

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the rising

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number of people over 50

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old who enjoy watching movies. Meanwhile, fewer and fewer people under 50

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old of

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are still interested in going to watch films . Teenagers between 14 - 24

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old in 1978 were the biggest fan of watching films.