The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
These two charts show the condition of men and
women
living in England alone. The first bar chart
above gives us the ratio of the English man compared with
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women
in
different ages who live alone.The second Change preposition
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chart
is a pie chart
which shows the numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
bedrooms
in the one man household.
Initially
, according to
the first chart
, it is clear that
the ratio of men and women
who live alone is almost 1:1 in
all ages. What’s more, in the 35-49 age Change preposition
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groups
, men's Fix the agreement mistake
group
proportion
is about 65%, which is much more than the proportion
of women
which is 35%. Overall
, we can see that the women
who live alone play a majority concentration between the two gender groups.
Moreover
, we can see in the second chart
, people who live alone generally live in a 2-bedroom house according to
the 35.4% statistics number. We can also
find it is almost the same proportion
(of 28% and 29%) that people live in houses which have two (28%) or three (29%) bedrooms
. Compare with other proportion
of number
of Change the article
a number
the number
bedrooms
in one-person
household, the Add an article
the one-person
a one-person
proportion
of people who have 4 or more bedrooms
constitute only 6.7% among all.Submitted by cyh000823 on
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