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give
the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.There are three different areas.They are the Change the verb form
gives
coast
,the mountains and the Use synonyms
lakes
.
Looking at the graph as a whole, the Use synonyms
proportion
of overseas Use synonyms
viritors
increased in three areas,Correct your spelling
visitors
however
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,
lakes
in 2007.
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deatil
, the Correct your spelling
detail
proportion
of the Use synonyms
coast
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slight
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slightly
a
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apply
decrease
until 1992,after that sharply increased Wrong verb form
decreased
at
over Change preposition
to
the
70 until 2007. In Correct article usage
apply
adition
,the rate of overseas visitors to the mountains Correct your spelling
addition
steady
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steadily
a
rise between 1987 and 2007. Correct article usage
apply
Furthemore
,the number of overseas Correct your spelling
Furthermore
visitoes
to the Correct your spelling
visits
lakes
increased Use synonyms
siginificantly
from 1987 to 2002,after that large a drop Correct your spelling
significantly
at
50 in 2007.In 1987,the Change preposition
to
proportion
of visitors to the Use synonyms
lakes
at 10% Use synonyms
however
in 2007 the Linking Words
Use synonyms
lakes
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lake's
proportion
was Use synonyms
at
50% so Change preposition
apply
different
Correct article usage
a different
40
% between 1987 and 2007.
As you can see, the Change preposition
of 40
coast
is popular Use synonyms
of
overseas Change preposition
with
visitor
until 1997,Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
then
the Linking Words
lakes
Use synonyms
the
most popular area from 1997 to 2002,Add a missing verb
were the
after
that the Correct word choice
and after
coast
is the most popular.Use synonyms
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