Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
The present century has witnessed the surprisingly increasing formation of multicultural societies where
people
who belong to a different culture
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cultures
religion
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religions
nation
stay together. Fix the agreement mistake
nations
Although
it has both negative and positive effects on a country
. There are many reasons why people
tend to emigrate from one country
to another. I would discuss some reasons, along with
its
merits and demerits in the upcoming paragraph.
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To begin
with some causes of why people
move from country
to country
. First
and foremost reason is for Add an article
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better
living Correct article usage
a better
standard
. Developed nations provide excellent services like health care services, career opportunities and many more to their citizens, so that’s why Fix the agreement mistake
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people
from undeveloped or developing countries
shift to the
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their
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nowadays most Add a comma
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such
as scholarship
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scholarships
skill
and education system which they do not receive in their own Fix the agreement mistake
skills
country
and that is
one of the reasons people
move to another country
.
Nevertheless
, this
demographic trend brings many advantages to raced mixed countries
. Firstly
, immigrants such
as engineers, scholars and other highly skilled professionals create competition as well as
productivity which boost
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up
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countries’
economy. Correct your spelling
countries
Secondly
, this
trend promotes different customs and traditions such
as new languages, food and fashion. In addition
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this
way, a small country
’s culture
gets an international standard which is very beneficial for that
nation to which it belongs.Correct determiner usage
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For example
, Punjabi culture
is famous in many countries
because many Punjabi people
are settled in different countries
. Further
, multiculturalism also
fosters cultural diversity and hence
people
become open-minded and tolerant.
However
, despite its benefits, this
situation has some negative consequences. Sometimes different culture
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to some
people
which create disturbance in society and indirectly affect the country
’s economy. For example
, in America, where it has still existed the
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having lots of merits of multi-cultures but drawbacks should not be ignored. I believe that the government’s control plays a vital role in society’s growth and development. So they have to make sure that equality and justice should be maintained if they want to move smoothly.Submitted by nguyenhuyena9k18 on
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