The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares how families spend their weekly budget in 1968 and 2018 in percentages. The data is representative
for
one nation. There has been a significant shift Change preposition
of
on
spending habits Change preposition
in
overall
.
In 1968, the majority valued groceries the most and petrol /power the least. In contrast
to that, in 2018 leisure activities were the most important and buying personal goods at
the bottom.
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was at
Although
the other six categories showed only mild to moderate changes, two subcategories, transport and apparel, had visible reversals during the two time
frames.
To summarise, data from one country has been analysed Add a hyphen
two-time
in
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on
effect
of consumer behaviour regarding weekly spending. Noticeably, the clearest shift has happened away from dining towards leisure activities.Add an article
the effect
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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