Transport delays are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?
Increasingly, many
cities
around the world are experiencing some traffic problems as well as
transport delays. As a consequence
, many people
believe that it is caused by poor infrastructure and others for many cities
are overpopulated. I`ll discuss both further
in this
thesis.
To commence, ancient cities
that weren't planned for the future struggle
to solve many problems caused by the lack of structure. Wrong verb form
struggled
Consequently
, people
have wasted many hours in traffic jams. For example
, according to
an article written by the New York Times, people
who live near New York spend at least 3 hours driving and 70% have developed mental disorders such
as stress and anxiety. In my opinion, mayors should invest in structural works such
as the expressway, underground subway and bicycle path to try to reduce the number of cars on the streets by at least 50%. Still, any structural benefits should spill over to nearby dormitory towns so their residents can leave their cars in the garage and use public transport or bicycles. In addition
, people
will be environmentally friendly.
Moreover
, the increase in people
moving and immigrating to these cities
is having an overall
impact on the people
who live there. As a result
, needs such
as housing rent, job opportunities, income
rates have become a problem for everyone. Correct word choice
and income
For example
, BBC Canada brought up some important data on inflation rates that show price increases like 15% more to rent a house, 30% to pay for parking and only 5
% of salary increase. In my mind, the Federal Government of Canada need to control the entrance of Correct article usage
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people
coming from the Express Entry immigration process, and directing
these Wrong verb form
direct
people
for
Change preposition
to
cities
where are really needing
.
Wrong verb form
needed
To sum up
, control of people
and investiments
in infrastructure Correct your spelling
investments
investment
are
completely important for Change the verb form
is
balance
Replace the word
balancing
people
quality's life
.Change preposition
of life
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