Q: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Several
languages
are dying out each year. Some people
believe that life would be easier due to
the decrease of
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in
language
numbers in the world. These people
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consider
languages
as a tool for communication. If society eliminates some options, It would be easier to converse each
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with each
others
. I believe that Change to a singular noun
other
languages
can not be accepted as basic tools. They are much more complicated devices.
First and foremost, languages
do not serve as basic tools. These collective devices contain cultural heritages and memories. They have a sentimental value for the related community. Different languages
may improve perspective on life, and create unfamiliar ideas which can be useful to develop society. Moreover
, languages
can not be thought without their native speakers. For instance
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German
language
, people
could be struggled to develop the
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people
and their language's have
a great impact on developing new technologies. Owing to their Change the verb form
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language
, several technical terms placed
in the literature.
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are placed
On the other hand
, the extinction of several languages
can result in losing bonds with other societies. If their languages
have been stopped to
use, their lifestyles would be damaged in the short term. To illustrate, many old Change preposition
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due to
the extinction of their languages
. In contrast
, some people
think that it is not important to protect old civilizations' languages
. Because of that plenty of these civilisations have been
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obsolete. From my point of view, protecting civilisations and their Change the article
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languages
is a responsibility for humankind.
In conclusion, some people
don't care about dying languages
out
. They believe that life would be easier with fewer Change preposition
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languages
. In my opinion, people
should protect all languages
and cultural heritages
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite