the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant

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The supplied table provides information about the six most spoken languages.

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, it can be seen that

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most wide

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spreader

lenguage

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language

Mandatin

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Mandarin

Chinise

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Chinese

and

also

it is with the most native

speakers

, but English has the highest number of

speakers

as an additional language.

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back to details, Mandarin Chinese total número of

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is 1,090

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language, as well

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the natives. Hindi and Spanish are approximately equal with 370

million

and 350

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respectively, but

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Hindi has 50

million

speakers

as an extra language. English

also

has a great number of

speakers

- 942 in total and more than 600

million

people that speak it as an additional and it is generally higher than other languages. In terms of Arabic it has 204

million

native

speakers

and in total 230

million

but at least spoken is Portuguese with only 213

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