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the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant

the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant
#information #languages #speakers #features #comparisons
The supplied table provides information about the six most spoken languages.
Overall
, it can be seen that
at
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 total number the
most wide
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 spreader
lenguage
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language
 is
Mandatin
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Mandarin
Chinise
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Chinese
 and
also
 it is with the most native
speakers
, but English has the highest number of
speakers
 as an additional language.
Go
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 back to details, Mandarin Chinese total número of
speakers
 is 1,090
million
, making it
in
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he
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the
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most spoken
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spoke
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 language, as well
from
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as
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 the natives. Hindi and Spanish are approximately equal with 370
million
 and 350
million
 respectively, but
in
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Hindi has 50
million
 more
speakers
 as an extra language. English
also
 has a great number of
speakers
- 942 in total and more than 600
million
 people that speak it as an additional and it is generally higher than other languages. In terms of Arabic it has 204
million
 native
speakers
 and in total 230
million
 but at least spoken is Portuguese with only 213
million
speakers
all together
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.
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