Nowadays, university students can participate in study abroad programs all over the world for differing lengths of time. In your opinion, what is the ideal duration for a study abroad program?

Studying abroad is the most controversial issue that people like to
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about. University
students
, their parents and
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department are dealing with
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issue and
also
they want to know about the most suitable duration of studying abroad. I firmly believe that over
6months
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6 months
between under 1 year can be a good solution to choose the duration of going abroad.
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will suggest some reasons and examples.
To begin
with, by experiencing other
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can learn their language and
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broaden their perspectives. At
this
point,
students
who want to
study
outside
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their
country
should
be stay
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foreign
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country
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6
months
.
This
is
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because
they have to experience their culture and
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their language would be difficult to understand if they stay
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country
under
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6
months
. One
study
showed that staying in
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country
under
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6
months
students
reported that their language skills are far less than
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over
6months
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periods experienced
students
.
Additionally
,
students
must experience other
culture
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by studying abroad. As I mentioned
it
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, It can
be broaden
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their perspective.
For instance
, I stayed in the
U.S
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U.S.
for 2
months
when I was
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university. Luckily, I had a chance to experience their Christmas Holiday seasons that I never have experienced since I have no religion. It was
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exciting
excited
and
thriiling
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thrilling
time for me.
However
, over 1 year to
study
abroad for university
students
is quite long, because they have to focus on their curriculum as well. For these reasons, I suggest over 6
months
and under 1 year to
study
abroad is
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period. At the same
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, Schools and
Students
should work
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this
issue together to make better choices.
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