Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

in

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era, the quality and a wide variety of technology are improved so that,

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trend has several affected on the communication of folk. in

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essay, I intend to say the positive and negative aspects of

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happen.

however

, I strongly agree that the positive attitudes towards are far more because it is able to improve accessibility and communication mankind widely. on the one hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that there are significant merits in the

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of technology in

people

connections. From

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point of view, they insist that mankind

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able to communicate

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all over the world easily through the Internet or social media and

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phenomenon has highly beneficial for the advancement of science. All professors are able to share

last

discoveries with other professors and talk about that subject.

furthermore

, immigration or travelling to other cities bothered most parents and children in the past because they did not have a suitable way to talk with them.

while

technology solved

this

problem easily through the internet and video call by several available apps.

on the other hand

, many experts justifiably agree that there were create minor drawbacks in relationships between

people

by modern amenities. it seems to them,

this

type of connection is unable to transit all emotions of the talker

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misunderstandings for the reader of that text.

additionally

, most numbers of the elderly generation are not familiar with these

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so it is not useful for throughout

people

.

however

, I do not find

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argument valid because the administration is able to reduce

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problem

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raising public awareness especially, for the older generation,

moreover

, most countries have enough infrastructure to create connections by video call

that is

able to solve most misunderstandings. in conclusion,

although

there are minor disadvantages to the connection between

people

, I strongly agree that its positive aspects are far more because it has upgraded the method of relationship with other

people

by minimal cost and time.