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Some thinks newspaper are the best method for reading the news while others think othe media is better. Discuss both sides give your own opinion .

#newspaper #method #news #media
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Some
people
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 seem to argue that reading the
newspaper
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 is a great way to acquire knowledge about recent national and international issues. At the same
time
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, others believe that a better way to get yourself updated is to use other advanced technologies
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 as television and online update apps.
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,
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 think it is convenient for
people
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 to obtain current events information from other
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. In
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 will discuss both of these views and support the
later
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 view. First and foremost there is no denying
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the fact that
people
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 have a habit of reading newspapers.
for example
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 ,
people
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 who read the
newspaper
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 daily in the morning. can't switch themselves to other media because they are habitual and emotionally attached to the act of buying and reading
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.
Whereas
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,
according to
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 some schools of thought, it can be argued that in
this
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 modern era ,
people
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 should take advantage of different
news
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sources
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. They are so busy
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working and earning money. They don’t have much
time
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 and money to spend on newspapers.
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 why
this
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 way of getting recent
news
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 updates is pre-eminent.
In addition
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, by using another form of media,
people
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 take lots of advantages.
For instance
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, on mobile or laptop they can easily search related articles, word meanings and links to related content and more. All these features are
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 complemented by the ability to select a diversity of
news
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sources
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. To recapitulate, nowadays
people
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 have very busy schedules. they have a lack of
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due to
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this
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 other
sources
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 of
keep
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 themselves updated
is
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 better rather than spending too much
time
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on
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reading a
newspaper
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. In the future, I think newspapers will cease and
people
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 take all types of
news
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 updates from online
sources
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.
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