You recently ordered a product online. When it arrived, you found that the product was not as shown on the website and it had some defects. You would like to return the product and seek a refund. Describe the details of the product including the date and time of the order and delivery. Mention how it was not similar to the product you ordered and the problems you came across. State how you would like the representative to resolve the issue you have faced.

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Dear customer care, I'm writing
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letter to inform you of my dissatisfaction with the product that I ordered from your website. I would like to describe to you some details about the product. I ordered a green
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with five red flowers on Wednesday 14th of April.
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I received my order after 5 days
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, since I checked on your website, it mentioned you will be received in the next two days.
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, When I opened the parcel, I realized that the
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is broken and
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of five red flowers, the company delivered 3 blue flowers.
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, the design of the
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is very different from the
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that I saw on your website. I would like to return the
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and I would be appreciated it if you refund all my money after receiving the product I would be thankful if you check in the store for the availability of the
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. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Sara Seifi
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