You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, Describe the construction Explain why the construction is a problem for you Say what you would like them to do about it You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to make a complaint regarding the road development project which is happening on marvel road. I do understand that road and transportation development is very important for our society.but my concern is there is a construction task going on for the

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three months and they are using heavy-duty machines and types of equipment. Let me explain my situation here,

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the loud sound of machines and equipment we are getting disturbed more than ever.

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, most of the job is happening at late night,

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, we could not able to sleep properly during the

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three months.

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, I feel that process is taking longer than usual as I can not see that

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job will end in the near future

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slow working progress. Kindly look into

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matter and please advise the person who In-Charge

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project to speed up the work

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if they can carry out the construction work

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the day time will be a great solution for my family. Thank you for your attention and kind cooperation,Hope to hear back from you soon! Yours faithfully, Mark Adam

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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