Many customs and traditional ways of behaviour are no longer relevant to the modern life and not worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?
Traditions
and standards of behaviour have long been integral parts of Use synonyms
society
, serving as a defining aspect of different nationalities and tribes. Today, there is a rising concern about the significance of those inheritances in modern Use synonyms
society
. I believe certain Use synonyms
traditions
should be preserved, Use synonyms
while
other customs, causing unnecessary burdens, should be eliminated from modern life.
Some traditional and moral standards play a crucial role in preserving the identity of a nation and serving a good purpose. Linking Words
For example
, respect for older people exists in many societies and forms a basis for good social relationships. Another simple example is how people perform a handshake when they meet, which shows the level of politeness and respect for another person. Linking Words
Such
gestures and behaviour standards should persist in Linking Words
society
because they generally benefit humanity.
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However
, certain Linking Words
traditions
are not worth spending time or money on and do more harm than good. Use synonyms
For example
, one of the most burdensome customs in the world is Uzbek weddings, which are generally known for a large number of guests invited and overly expensive restaurants where they are held. Uzbeks work almost their entire lifetime to accumulate enough money to organize Linking Words
such
weddings for their sons and daughters. These Linking Words
traditions
bear little benefit for people, and the amount of time and dedication wasted on them could be spent on more valuable activities.
In a nutshell, every nation has custom social norms and Use synonyms
traditions
which form its identity. But there are Use synonyms
also
plenty of practices which only exist for demonstrative purposes of power and wealth, which, I believe, do not have a place in contemporary Linking Words
society
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite