In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples

Today,

a

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in a

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lot

of countries around the world young

people

dicede

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decide

to leave their

parents

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parent's

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home

once they finish school.They start living on their own or sharing a

home

with friends.I think

this

is a

benefit

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beneficial

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development.So

this

essay will show you give reasons for my answer and include relevant examples. On the one hand,there are several reasons why I think

this

is a positive development.The most main reason is that young

peopole

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people

can get a

lot

of skills if they leave their parent's

house

because when they stay

parent's

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parents'

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home

, parents are doing

someting

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something

for

children

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their children

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.

Such

as

,

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cooking,

clear

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clearing

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room

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the room

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,take care

when

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of when

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they take ill.So young

people

help by their parents,but if younger living alone,they should do anything by

thirself

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herself

himself

.

For example

,making food,

clearning

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cleaning

clearing

room

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the room

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and

shucdule

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schedule

of

money

.So young

people

get a

lot

of skills that we need in life.

Secondly

,we can get a

lot

of

infomartion

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information

if they start sharing a

home

.Because

of

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apply

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we

have

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think of how to use

house

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the house

a house

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,

house

rules each other,so sharing a

home

is the best

one

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apply

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way we can get information that we are different thinking of each other.In

adition

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addition

, we can know

friend

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a friend

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is very important

for

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in

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our life because we can help each other so easily if sharing a

home

.The third benefit is that we do not need a

lot

of

money

if we are sharing a

home

.Yung

people

do not have a

lot

of

money

and they are so difficult to buy a

house

or rent a

house

,

however

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they can

spent

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spend

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money

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more money

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cheper

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cheaper

than

buy

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buying

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a

house

alone if sharing a

home

. In conclusion,young

pepole

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people

should

living

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live

be living

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on their own or

sharing

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share

be sharing

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a

home

because they can get a

lot

of skills and we can learn about

socity

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society

.I hope in the

futer

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future

more and more

people

living alone or sharing a

home

.