The charts show the distribution of the world’s water and use of water in three countries.

The charts show the distribution of the world’s water and use of water in three countries.
The pie charts illustrate the sorts of the world’s
water
while
the bar chart shows the consumption of
water
in three countries.
Overall
, all
water
separates into two main sorts
as well as
freshwater accounts for three kinds of
water
.
Additionally
, the large use of
water
in order to Agriculture in Saudi Arabia, and Egypt.
In contrast
, Canada shares the
water
with Industry development. With regard distribution of the world’s
water
, all
water
is sorted by fresh and salt
water
(3% and 97%, respectively).
Furthermore
, freshwater consists of Ground a fifth
whereas
Ice and Gladers exactly 79%.
Conversely
, surface
water
institute a mere 1%. Agriculture consumption of
water
both over 75% in Saudi Arabia and Egypt
while
Canada allocated 10%.
In contrast
, Canada which is high usage of
water
in order for industry, meanwhile, the other two nations both have under 10%.
Nonetheless
, the domestic proportion of
water
is above 10% in all countries.
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