The charts show the distribution of the world’s water and use of water in three countries.
The pie charts illustrate the sorts of the world’s
water
while
the bar chart shows the consumption of water
in three countries.
Overall
, all water
separates into two main sorts as well as
freshwater accounts for three kinds of water
. Additionally
, the large use of water
in order to Agriculture in Saudi Arabia, and Egypt. In contrast
, Canada shares the water
with Industry development.
With regard distribution of the world’s water
, all water
is sorted by fresh and salt water
(3% and 97%, respectively). Furthermore
, freshwater consists of Ground a fifth whereas
Ice and Gladers exactly 79%. Conversely
, surface water
institute a mere 1%.
Agriculture consumption of water
both over 75% in Saudi Arabia and Egypt while
Canada allocated 10%. In contrast
, Canada which is high usage of water
in order for industry, meanwhile, the other two nations both have under 10%. Nonetheless
, the domestic proportion of water
is above 10% in all countries.Submitted by gantulgaamarzaya6 on
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