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Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from thegovernment should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

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The
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 cannot fund all
research
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 projects because its budget is limited;
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, some people insist that only
research
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 pertaining to the field of science and technology should receive
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 funding.
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 I do admit that scientific
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 should receive maximum funding, I totally disagree with the argument that the
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 should stop funding
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 in less ‘useful’ fields like arts or history. Scientific
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 certainly provides tremendous value because scientific innovations have the power to change our lives for good. Take,
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, the invention of the antibiotic.
This
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 wonder drug saved the lives of millions of people and continues to be a major lifesaver even today. The computer is
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 the result of scientific
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.
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 invention changed the way we work and store information. Today, it is impossible to imagine a world without computers. Other inventions like electricity, motor vehicles and home appliances have
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 revolutionized our lives.
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, just because scientific
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 provides more value it does not mean that
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 in other ‘less useful’ fields should be discouraged. Of course, archaeological
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 or
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 into the origin of languages is unlikely to have a massive impact on our day-to-day life. Yet,
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 information is crucial for understanding how we reached where we are today. The truth is that there are still a lot of things we can learn from previous generations. These kinds of
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 may even lead us to a common ancestor and that might put an end to the hostility prevailing between many nations. Historical
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 teaches us about mistakes we must not repeat. The World Wars and the Genocide are two examples.
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 on these horrific incidents keeps reminding us about the extent of damage they caused. If future generations do not learn about them, they might be tempted to commit the same mistakes again.
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, not only scientific
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 but
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 in other fields
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 provide great value.
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, the argument that only scientific
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 should receive
government
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 funding does not hold water.

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