In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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payment

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changed in recent decades. Because of the

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developments, most

of

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people

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choose

using

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cellphone

apps

such

as Alipay

instead

of paying by credit card or cash. I believe the benefits are greater than the drawbacks There are various reasons that companies and individuals encourage paying by

cellphone

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. If everything

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for

cellphone

apps, the cashiers will

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manage all the payments. Before they have to accept cash or debit and credit

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card

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. Sometimes they receive fake money from

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customers,

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of

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they take

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by themselves.

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why cashiers always lack hands and

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all the

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. Because

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payment methods have

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impact

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many business companies.

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, paying for things using

mobile

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phone is a kind of revolution in

business

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industry

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individuals, we can have more benefits from paying

use

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cellphone

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. It brings us a lot of

convence

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convenience

such

as online shopping, online banking,

E-transfer

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. People do not need to waste

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waiting.

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is limited,

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saves us a lot of

time

and gives us more freedom. I believe mobile phone payment is just the beginning of the

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, the government and the country even the world will

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more

technology

to support

humans

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daily life in the future. In conclusion, I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Both the government and individuals can support

with

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purchasing by mobile phone apps.

Technology

makes our life more productive and effective.