A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter •describe the problem; •explain how it affects you; • say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to you concerning an issue that I am encountering for the past few days. As you are aware, I live in the proximity of your cafe. I need to pass by your cafe to get to my place. Unfortunately, there are some chairs and tables on the pavement which are obstructing my way. I tried to use the opposite side of the road to walk back home yesterday,

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, the road is broken and damaged. I feel hesitant to walk on the pavement

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the fact that the seats are occupied and I need to walk on the main road which is quite dangerous. I would highly appreciate

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you could please move the chairs and tables inside the cafe. I will report to the police if the pavement is not clear by next week. Yours Sincerely, Will Greto

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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