The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.
The bar chart provides the information of percentage of using transport modes by different automobiles
such
as bus ,car,bike and by foot in three separate years 1960,1980 and 2000.
Overall
, the usage of cars increased gradually throughout the years.Although
the proportion by walk
is higher at the beginning of the period it declined by the end of the period to the lowest.
Usage of Bus fluctuated between the years.Wrong verb form
walking
it
was around 25% in 1960Correct your spelling
It
,
after it rose to more than the quarter and it declined in 2000 to almost 15%.Preference Remove the comma
apply
of
cars gradually increased and it was the highest in 2000 contributing more than 35%.
The percentage of usage of bikes and by walk dramatically declined.Bikes contributed around 25% at the start of the period and they declined to 20% and almost 7% in 1980 and 2000 respectively.The proportion by foot was highest at the start of the year 1960 ,it dipped to 17% in 1980 and Change preposition
for
at
around 9% in 2000.Change preposition
to
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