The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps provide information about the changes in the
park
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arrangement from 1920 to the present day.
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, apart from the two central entrances and one part of
rose
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the rose
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garden, everything has
been
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experienced replacement or
transform
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in the
park
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over the period.
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with, in 1920, in the middle of the
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was situated the fountain, which was superseded by a big rose garden surrounded with seat places.
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this
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, the stage for musicians, which
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on the left of the fountain, was transformed and developed into a big
amphitheater
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for concerts. In 1920, the pond for water plants was located at the right north corner of the
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, but now water
feature
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at
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the right south corner. Another significant feature is that the
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in 1920 had
considerable
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amount of green zones,
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as three rose gardens and a glasshouse,
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the modern
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has
less
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green parts. It should be emphasized that now
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park
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the park
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has a section of entertainment,unlike a
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in 1920, on the right side of the
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including a cafe and children’s play area.
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, the
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was added with a new entrance from the underground car
park
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on Eldon Street.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • renovations
  • modernize
  • upgraded
  • transformed
  • landscaping
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • green spaces
  • eco-friendly
  • public space
  • community impact
  • historical elements
  • conservation
  • recreational areas
  • urban planning
  • sustainable development
  • layout
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