The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The line graph illustrates the data of people travelling by

car

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,

bus

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or

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train

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trains

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each day from 1970 until 2030 in the UK.

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, it clearly seems that

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car

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was the most popular from the beginning until

end

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the end

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.

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, people using the

bus

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are decreased over time and replaced with

train

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. Between 1970 and 1980 any of the types of transport didn’t show

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change. After 1980

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travellers

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by

car

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and

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increased

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number

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a number

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of

bus

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users started to decrease. From 2000 both

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and

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train’s

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data stayed without change at around 7 and 3

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respectively

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at that time the index of

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bus

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buses

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continued falling. In around 2014

train

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users and

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bus

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,bus

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users were equal with

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4

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of 4

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million

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.

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this

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car

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and

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train’s

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train

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index rocketed until 2030 with the number of 9 and 5

million

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respectively.

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,

travelers

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travellers

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by

train

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decreased slowly and reached 3

million

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by the end.