The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph illustrates the data of people travelling by
car
, bus
or train
each day from 1970 until 2030 in the UK.
Change the verb form
trains
Overall
, it clearly seems that car
was the most popular from the beginning until Correct article usage
the car
end
. Add an article
the end
Although
, people using the bus
are decreased over time and replaced with train
.
Between 1970 and 1980 any of the types of transport didn’t show the
change. After 1980 Correct determiner usage
any
travelers
by Change the spelling
travellers
car
and train
increased while
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
bus
users started to decrease. From 2000 both car
and train’s
data stayed without change at around 7 and 3 Change noun form
train
million
respectively while
at that time the index of bus
continued falling.
In around 2014 Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
users and bus
users were equal with Add a comma
,bus
average
Correct article usage
an average
4
Change preposition
of 4
million
. After
this
car
and train’s
index rocketed until 2030 with the number of 9 and 5 Change noun form
train
million
respectively. Whereas
, travelers
by Change the spelling
travellers
train
decreased slowly and reached 3 million
by the end.Submitted by sarvarhonmuminov on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bus, train, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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