Studying Abroad Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is controversial that studying in different countries can always have a positive effect on
people
. Some people
think that studying abroad can be a chance to broaden their future possibilities, while
others believe that they should avoid facing difficulties in an unknown place. Personally, I believe that students
should learn in oversea
schools Fix the agreement mistake
overseas
for developing
Change preposition
to develop
people’s
skills and Change noun form
their
building
a global network. Wrong verb form
build
To begin
with, Getting immersed in a strict and international environment fires students
up and learn a lot. For instance
, a signboard in Harvard University’s library fire
Correct subject-verb agreement
fires
people
up and leads to their promising future. Although
the students
are forced to study and obtain new skills by spending most of their school life, this
helps them to expand their career possibilities like a CEO of big companies or innovative entrepreneurs. Furthermore
, a report said that a career is determined by how much people
study during their school days. even if people
may face difficulties in a different country, the advantages outbound disadvantages. In addition
to the environment, networking also
enables people
to expand their future possibilities. For example
, Meta’s CEO started their business in their university days with some colleagues. As the story is turned into a movie, some schoolmates decided
to establish the company from the little things in their university life. nobody could imagine the event at all and it proved that everyone can obtain chances if they dive into unknown places. In conclusion, Wrong verb form
decide
although
there may be various hardships or troubles, students
should go to overseas schools for grabbing
the opportunity to develop their skills and build global relationships.Change preposition
to grab
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
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