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Studying Abroad Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is controversial that studying in different countries can always have a positive effect on
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. Some
people
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 think that studying abroad can be a chance to broaden their future possibilities,
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 others believe that they should avoid facing difficulties in an unknown place. Personally, I believe that
students
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 should learn in
oversea
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 schools
for developing
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to develop
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people’s
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their
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 skills and
building
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 a global network.
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 with, Getting immersed in a strict and international environment fires
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 up and learn a lot.
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, a signboard in Harvard University’s library
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people
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 up and leads to their promising future.
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 the
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 are forced to study and obtain new skills by spending most of their school life,
this
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 helps them to expand their career possibilities like a CEO of big companies or innovative entrepreneurs.
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, a report said that a career is determined by how much
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 study during their school days. even if
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 may face difficulties in a different country, the advantages outbound disadvantages.
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 to the environment, networking
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 enables
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 to expand their future possibilities.
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, Meta’s CEO started their business in their university days with some colleagues. As the story is turned into a movie, some schoolmates
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 to establish the company from the little things in their university life. nobody could imagine the event at all and it proved that everyone can obtain chances if they dive into unknown places. In conclusion,
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 there may be various hardships or troubles,
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 should go to overseas schools
for grabbing
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 the opportunity to develop their skills and build global relationships.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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