Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view. Opinion, for and against essay
Even in the modern era,
libraries
are the most popular place to visit for reading Use synonyms
books
and magazines because of their calmness and quiet environment. Most Use synonyms
people
think that Use synonyms
libraries
must provide free services to everyone Use synonyms
otherwise
, it is useless to spend money over there, Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
internet
gives Add an article
the internet
most
valuable exposure Correct article usage
the most
of
everything which folks want to search. Let's discuss both points in forthcoming paragraphs.
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Firstly
, everyone wants Linking Words
silent
place to concentrate and Add an article
a silent
focuse
on reading and studying. Correct your spelling
focus
focuses
Therefore
, the library is a favourable place for the public Linking Words
due to
its numerous resources of Linking Words
books
,magazines and newspapers. Recent research shows that 90% of Use synonyms
people
claim that undoubtedly they focus more on reading Use synonyms
while
they are in Linking Words
libraries
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
books
are more reliable and comfortable to read as compared to electronic gadgets. After these Use synonyms
benefits
I don't think Add a comma
benefits,
its
worthless if Replace the word
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it is
people
pay some money for Use synonyms
this
luxury experience.
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Secondly
, to some extent modern technology solves the problem Linking Words
to search
the reading material easily and faster but it is not successful Change preposition
of searching
to replace
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in replacing
the
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apply
books
. Most readers prefer Use synonyms
books
and newspapers to read after having online sites and applications. Use synonyms
People
get easily distracted when Use synonyms
the
read online sites and it Correct your spelling
they
also
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effects
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affects
on
their eyesight. Change preposition
apply
For example
, a UK study shows that most Linking Words
people
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get
weak eyesight because of the overuse of the internet and mobiles and they feel more distractions , they barely concentrate on their work.
In conclusion, Verb problem
have
although
technology makes public life so convenient by giving wonderful experiences of the internet, Linking Words
libraries
are becoming more productive and reliable for readers it doesn't matter if they want to pay for Use synonyms
libraries
because they get amazing experiences.Use synonyms
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Overall, the essay addresses the topic effectively and provides a balanced discussion of the pros and cons of public libraries being free. Try to develop your arguments with more specific examples and evidence to strengthen your points.
coherence and cohesion
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