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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

#friend #drive #advice
Dear John, I am thrilled to hear that you are planning to learn
driving
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. Driving has many
advatages
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advantages
 and provides a lot of flexibility. Choosing a good
driiving
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driving
 school is critical to your learning experience. One of the main
advantage
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 of driving is that it enables you to plan your trip on your own time
unlike
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 public transportation which needs to be planned ahead.
Furthermore
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 it
also
 provides you with flexibility in taking
most
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the most
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 optimized route to your destination
whereas
 other modes of transportation
has
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have
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 fixed routes. I highly recommend the Peppers driving school, where my brother learnt
driving
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. The school provides
continious
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continuous
 education
program
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 and personal training. Trainers are available all seven days which allows flexibility in learning.
Also
,
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the curriculam
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curriculam
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curriculum
 can be customised depending on
current
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 skill set. Let me share some tips that helped me.
Firstly
, be
thougrough
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thorough
 about the road signs. I would recommend reading a book on the topic to get you up to speed.
Secondly
, practice driving on daily basis with trainers.Driving is
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a pleaseant
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pleaseant
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pleasant
 experience and I wish you the best
for
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 your learning. Regards, Aravinthan
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