The diagram below shows the process of electricity production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates two different types of procedures
Change preposition
by that
that
electricity is generated by hydroelectric power stations. Correct pronoun usage
which
Overall
, there are similar steps between a traditional plant
and a present hydroelectric plant
which are in a water
-intake process and the work of a turbine
machine.
In the beginning, for a run-of-river plant
, water
in the river flows downhill into a new entrance which a big tube had built for the new plant
for allowing water
to the turbines. The following step is
the water
flow will get into the turbine
machines and activate the turbine
blends.
Regarding the traditional method, one turbine
in the machine was turned by the water
flow and the other one worked with generators. Even though the hydroelectric plant
now is using the same way of turbine
work, there is an outlet to let some water
flow back to the river from the turbine
.
In the final process, after the generators work, the power is made by the turbines. Lastly
, it is sent to conduct electricity by transmission lines at the other station.Submitted by pookiekw1997 on
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