The diagram below shows the process of electricity production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of electricity production.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure illustrates two different types of procedures
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electricity is generated by hydroelectric power stations.
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, there are similar steps between a traditional
plant
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and a present hydroelectric
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which are in a
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-intake process and the work of a
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machine. In the beginning, for a run-of-river
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,
water
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in the river flows downhill into a new entrance which a big tube had built for the new
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for allowing
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to the turbines.
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the
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flow will get into the
turbine
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machines and activate the
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blends.  Regarding the traditional method, one
turbine
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in the machine was turned by the
water
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flow and the other one worked with generators. Even though the hydroelectric
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now is using the same way of
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work, there is an outlet to let some
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flow back to the river from the
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. In the final process, after the generators work, the power is made by the turbines.
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, it is sent to conduct electricity by transmission lines at the other station.
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