The diagram below shows the process of electricity production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates two different types of procedures
Change preposition
by that
that
electricity is generated by hydroelectric power stations. Correct pronoun usage
which
Overall
, there are similar steps between a traditional Linking Words
plant
and a present hydroelectric Use synonyms
plant
which are in a Use synonyms
water
-intake process and the work of a Use synonyms
turbine
machine.
In the beginning, for a run-of-river Use synonyms
plant
, Use synonyms
water
in the river flows downhill into a new entrance which a big tube had built for the new Use synonyms
plant
for allowing Use synonyms
water
to the turbines. Use synonyms
The following step is
the Linking Words
water
flow will get into the Use synonyms
turbine
machines and activate the Use synonyms
turbine
blends.
Regarding the traditional method, one Use synonyms
turbine
in the machine was turned by the Use synonyms
water
flow and the other one worked with generators. Even though the hydroelectric Use synonyms
plant
now is using the same way of Use synonyms
turbine
work, there is an outlet to let some Use synonyms
water
flow back to the river from the Use synonyms
turbine
.
In the final process, after the generators work, the power is made by the turbines. Use synonyms
Lastly
, it is sent to conduct electricity by transmission lines at the other station.Linking Words
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